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Chapter 28 – Simply Sweet

Skye slowly brought his face closer and closer to mine until I felt his warm, soft lips against mine. My eyes fluttered shut, and I breathed in deeply through my nose, trying to take in as much of his beautiful scent as I could; he smelled like the cool, night air. His kiss was gentle, hesitant. I could feel him analyzing my reaction the way he had whenever he'd been with me before.

Then, I felt Skye pulling away. Our lips had just barely parted when I pushed forward, causing our lips to meet again. Skye recovered from my sudden change quickly, this time pressing his lips against mine more forcefully. His hands moved from my face to my hair, gentle fingers lacing through my chocolaty brown tresses.

I ran my hands along his bare chest, feeling his increasing heartbeat underneath my fingertips. Skye moaned against my lips, his hands tightening in my hair. Likewise, I responded with a small cry of pleasure, parting my lips slightly. He seemed to slow for a moment, and I feared his wonderful lips would leave mine again.

Instead, he parted his lips, and I felt the quick, feathery light touch of the tip of his tongue against my lips. Without a moment's hesitation, I eagerly welcomed him in, allowing his tongue to touch mine, deepening our passionate kiss. His hand traveled lightly down to the small of my back, and Skye pulled me closer until there was no space left between us. I could feel all of his pent up desire and love for me; it was consuming, overwhelming, and unreservedly incredible.

We kissed again and again, and I finally built up the courage to push my own tongue into his mouth. The sound of his voice was mystical and charming. Just the sight of him nearly made me swoon. The touch of his skin against mine was exhilarating, causing a pleasant tingle wherever we met. And his smell was utterly intoxicating. But he tasted like absolutely nothing I'd ever experienced before. I struggled to find the words to describe it, and settled on the simple word, 'sweet'. Everything else about him was cool and suave, but where I was exploring, inside of him, he was simply warm and caring and sweet.

Time became an irrelevant variable. In those moments, all that I could think, all that I could feel, all that I could ever need was Skye.

Even as his kisses became gentler, I could still sense the fiery passion between us. It was only when our lips parted again that I realized how out of breath I had become. Every inch of my skin was flushed, and when I looked up I saw that Skye's cream face had also taken on an intense red hue.

I smiled shyly at this observation, and Skye smiled in return. Biting my lower lip, I struggled to keep my eyes on his emerald ones. "Hey, don't do that," he crooned. Skye moved a hand to my face, using his thumb to gently prod my lower lip out from under my teeth. "I happen to like those, and I certainly don't want to see them hurt."

He gave me a quick peck and I giggled. "Well they're mine, so I can do whatever I want with them," I argued, catching my lip between my teeth again.

"I have to disagree with you, my beautiful Jill," Skye replied lightly, nudging my lip out again. "Because you're lips are, in fact," he continued, gazing intensely at me, "Mine." He growled the last word and lunged at me suddenly. I screamed in surprise as I found myself sprawled on my bed with Skye poised elegantly above me. "And you, my lovely Jill, are also," he began, leaning in closer until our bodies were pressed together again. "Mine." This was immediately followed by another dizzying kiss that made my fingers and toes curl.

When he pulled back, a satisfied grin crossed his features as he noticed my dream-like state. "Mine," he repeated with a quick wink, trailing his hands down my body.

"Rather possessive, aren't we Skye?" I asked somewhat breathlessly.

His hands paused and tightened at my waist, and he leaned back in. "You have no idea," he murmured with a light kiss in the corner of my mouth.

A shiver ran through my body as I sighed contentedly, and Skye's eyelids fluttered in response. "Goddess, you are intoxicating," he whispered, kissing me passionately. "Absolutely everything about you is delicious," he said, with a kiss between each word.

Needless to say I was lightheaded by the end of that sentence. But something that he said lingered in my mind. Delicious… I thought. Delicious… Delicious… It was only then that I realized how hungry I was. The last meal I had was breakfast at 6 o'clock in the morning. A quick glance at the clock told me that it was just around 11 o'clock at night.

Skye noticed my intense, contemplative look, and asked, "What is it?"

Feeling stupid, I answered, "Nothing! I just… I just realized that I haven't eaten since breakfast. And I'm hungry. Sorry." I immediately felt guilty for expressing such a minor concern. Way to totally kill the mood, I chastened myself.

"That's wonderful!" Skye exclaimed unexpectedly, sitting up.

"Huh…?" was all I managed to say in my confused state as Skye pulled me into a sitting position as well.

"Jill," Skye began, dropping his voice, "I want you to try my curry. Please allow me the privilege of making you some."

Wasn't expecting that… Then I recalled that night when he told me about his passion for cooking. The eagerness in his features made me smile. "Yeah, sure! I've been waiting to try your curry since that night at the beach."

Skye positively glowed. "Wonderful! Now, where do you keep your ingredients for curry?"

"Ingredients?" I repeated stupidly, "Oh, right! Well, I don't exactly cook much so I'm not sure what I have, let alone what ingredients are needed to make curry." Skye blanched for a moment and I immediately felt bad. "But feel free to check in my kitchen!"

Skye's shocked face was replaced by an eager one. "You don't cook, you say?" I nodded, wondering what he was thinking. I was afraid he would suggest… "Then I'll teach you! We can cook some curry together." I couldn't say no to those beautiful emerald eyes, obviously. I nodded slowly and his glow returned. "Then let's begin!" he exclaimed, jumping to his feet. I began to stand up when he whisked me into his arms bridal style and charged for my kitchen. I couldn't help but laugh; I had never seen him so excited before. This should be interesting…
So here is the long awaited first legitimate JillxSkye kiss! I cannot begin to tell you how many times I've written and rewritten this chapter... :iconimdeadplz:

I really just could not do this right. :iconsweatdropplz: But I think that this chapter still turned out to be pretty good in the end, so I'm happy with it! I hope you like it, too, chicas!

Seriously, this sexy/fluffyness was only made possible by my deep desire to appease all your fangirling and what not. Not to say that I didn't somewhat enjoy it... :iconnosebleedingplz: Still, I'm not quite accustomed to writing this sort of stuff, so I tried my best! I hope I delivered! Tell me what you think... AKA COMMENT. SERIOUSLY. DO IT.

Love ya! :icononiskiplz:


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:icontheofania13:
Theofania13 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Awwwwww! :heart: :me having a heartattack of cuteness: You are so talented!The part that I actually laughed was the one "hay how about we eat some curry instead of doing the something else" ;)
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Rainrain9 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Great as always! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Sasukefan1029 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Writer
awesome as alwasy i am waiting foe the next chapter
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Chairrypie Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
.......:eager::iconpissedplz::stinkeye:
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
eh? What's this range of faces...?
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Chairrypie Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
me iz waiting...:fight: *is a very impatient fangirl*
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
lolol, sorry it's taking so long!
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Keira000 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i was away on holidays and came home to this.
i got a few weird looks when i totally went for a serious LOL :la::la::la:

you're sooo brilliant.
do they realise they are going to be cooking in their knickers? :o
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
haha, that's awesome!
thank you so much! :tighthug: that's a new compliment :D
and lolol, yeaaaah. the cooking is totally spur of the moment so it never occured to them to put clothes on ;P I was gonna try to find a way to put it in there without messing the story up
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Keira000 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
we all have faith in you
that you will succeed :squee:
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
dawww, thanks chica! :D :tighthug:
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bohemiananimegirl Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
aw I loved this sooo much I did laugh at the end though by the twist on lets eat food instead of *cough cough* brilliant
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
hehe, thanks! Yeahhh, this chapter was hrad enough to write... I don't think that I'd be able to uh... write *cough cough* ...no... haha, so I decided to return to what I'm best at writing... awkward cute stuff! :D
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bohemiananimegirl Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
No I agree I love the awkward cute stuff way more :)
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:iconsimplechica:
SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
haha, yay! :D
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bohemiananimegirl Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
you should be happy
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
I AM! :la:
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zeki-amuto62 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
IT'S SO FLUFFY!!!! IMMA DIE!!!! Gosh that was amazing!!! Loved every. Single. Word.
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Don't die! I'm not done yet! ;P You really think so? Dawww, thanks! :hug:
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zeki-amuto62 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. It's amazing! Oh, and "breathe" should be "breath" (forgot to put that in my first comment)
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
dammit all I always miss those things! *rushes back to fix it* thank you!
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zeki-amuto62 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! That's why you have me here to check, being the grammar nazi I can be at times xD
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Well, I'm thankful for that! :dummy: yay!
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mich117 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
OMGFINALLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!! <333333333 this is absolutely perfect :D
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
dawww, you really think so? :D that's awesome! thanks, chica! I was really unsure about this chapter but so many people were happy with it so I'm happy, too!
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mich117 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
i loved you it! u r so talented at writting! :o :hug:
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
awwww! :tighthug: thanks so much, chica! I love your comments, they always make me smile! You're so kind!
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mich117 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
you're very welcome :) and thanks :D :hug:
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
np! :D
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mich117 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
i loved it* XD
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SunshineBlondie Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
theykissedtheykissedtheykissedtheykissed THEY FIRETRUCKING KISSEDDDDD :''DDDDDD

"Rather possessive, aren't we Skye?" Damn straight he is Jill. :iconmegustacheplz:

Nooooo continue making out. Go back to the bed. Go back. No kitchen. :icongtfoguyplz:

Nooo I'm just kidding I loved this and i love you ajkasbsjsajkd :iconluvluvplz:

Ohhh wait 1 more question o,o Do you watch Smosh?
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:iconsimplechica:
SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
haha, yes chica, yes they did. :squee:
lololol, oh youuu! ;P
I'm so happy that you loved it! And even happier that you love meee! :D
my sister has shown me some of their stuff, but I haven't seen much. Why?
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SunshineBlondie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
:iconohstopityouplz: XD

Hmm, idk, you just seem like the type to watch them :shrug: XD
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
haha, I don't watch too much TV or youtube-ish stuff cause I'm just so busy with other stuff :P
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SunshineBlondie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
God, I hardly ever watch Tv, unless its like a special night for premieres and stuff :B

But I can't stay off YouTube <3
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
so true. I watch Glee, New Girl, Once Upon A Time, Adventure Time, and... hm. That's about it. OH! And Suits. But the season just ended sooo...
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SunshineBlondie Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Adventure Time! =O <3 I love Modern Family, Don't Trust the B, New Girl if it's on, and any like Criminal Minds or CSI if I'm just flipping the channels Cx

I heard Suits is good, is it? o.o
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Cool! I've seen some episodes of those shows, but I don't really follow them.
IT'S SOOOO GOOD. I'm really into the lawyer-esque type drama, so I'm kinda obsessed. There has only been two seasons, so you could probably catch up if you reallllly wanted to. Lolol.
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lesleyh2012 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
:la: :la: :dummy: :iconlaplz: :dummy: :la: :la:

YESH! Finally, they kiss...and WOO did they kiss x3 I really liked the thoughts going on in Jill's head though, not just the descriptions of the kissing. :3
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
hehe, thanks! I worked really hard on this for a really long time and I'm pretty happy about how it turned out! :D thanks for the love!
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lesleyh2012 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
You're welcome!! :heart: It shows!
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
thank youuuuuu! :tighthug:
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lesleyh2012 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
You're welcome! :hug:
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HarvestMoonFreak723 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it was written extremely well for any lack of experience you claim to have. The mood and actions were perfect and very realistic and easy to believe and see. Well done.
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Thanks so much! :iconawwwplz:
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HarvestMoonFreak723 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, happy to help
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SirWongIII Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm not quite accustomed to reading this sort of stuff... :O_o: But, that aside, it was very good. :lol: Especially love the sudden "Oh, I'm hungry!". :)
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Yeah, I couldn't figure out how to end the smexyness of it all... so I went with awkward food babbling! Returned to the roots of my writing. Cute, awkward moments :D
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KireiChokoreto Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Because awkward food-babbling seems to be what Skye and Jill are best at doing! :XD:
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SimpleChica Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
damn right! lololol. returning to my cute, awkward moments :D
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